http://bekindrewrite.com write unto others as you would have them write unto you Tue, 06 Oct 2015 02:21:21 +0000 hourly 1 https://wordpress.org/?v=7.0 http://bekindrewrite.com/inspiration-monday/sneeze-guard-by-holly-burger/#comment-118829 Tue, 06 Oct 2015 02:21:21 +0000 http://bekindrewrite.com/?page_id=3456#comment-118829 This is a sweet mix of loneliness, pride, and hope. You’ve created a strong and interesting character with your protagonist, and I like how you repeat “Jim, from work.” It makes the story feel more real.

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