Day One of Voice Week! Remember, InMon is postponed till next week.
Meanwhile, here’s my first voice. I’m going with the prompt “the end of the world,” and experimenting a little more with perspectives (not just tone and word choice) this year.
Lemme know whatcha think!
The last part!!!
Catch up: Part I, Part II, Part III, Part IV
Image by Jurvetson
The old man had made his own discoveries before the boy did. He had, in fact, seen the bird people on Gallun-Z not two years ago. But he, too, had sought photos on the webs, and made the same discovery the boy had. But being older and wiser, he had realized what it meant.
This is the penultimate chapter! Read Part I, Part II and Part III first.
Image by Dhilung
For two days, the boy did nothing. He couldn’t sleep. He barely ate. He swept the same section of floor twenty times before remembering to move. He watched the comet; he watched the winged people. And he felt a cold sickness grow inside him.
Read Part I and Part II first.
Image by Ed Sweeney
The boy went through the motions, pointing the scope at Kepler-3b, at Kepler-43b, then setting back to zenith and angling to focus on Lutwidge-7, then Asimov-5a. Finally, satisfied, the old man left him alone with his broom.
Continued from yesterday.
Image by Snowpeak
The boy started small at first, looking at just Campbell-38. It didn’t look so very different from the photos.
You’re a fool, said the boy to himself. Nobody’s hiding anything. He’s just a crotchety old man who wants everything done his way.