Comments on: Echoes in the Vacuum: Part V http://bekindrewrite.com/2014/07/19/echoes-in-the-vacuum-part-v/ write unto others as you would have them write unto you Tue, 22 Jul 2014 01:16:07 +0000 hourly 1 https://wordpress.org/?v=7.0 By: Stephanie Orges http://bekindrewrite.com/2014/07/19/echoes-in-the-vacuum-part-v/#comment-59157 Tue, 22 Jul 2014 01:16:07 +0000 http://bekindrewrite.com/?p=3074#comment-59157 In reply to Jubilare.

Ah, yes! I think you’re right. I felt parts 2-5 were a little weak, but I couldn’t figure out why. Maybe I can tighten this one up.

I’m honored to have nearly made you cry!

]]> By: Stephanie Orges http://bekindrewrite.com/2014/07/19/echoes-in-the-vacuum-part-v/#comment-59155 Tue, 22 Jul 2014 01:14:46 +0000 http://bekindrewrite.com/?p=3074#comment-59155 In reply to Keith Edgar Channing.

Sorry. I feel like it’s too long already! I’m really glad you liked it.

]]> By: Stephanie Orges http://bekindrewrite.com/2014/07/19/echoes-in-the-vacuum-part-v/#comment-59154 Tue, 22 Jul 2014 01:14:23 +0000 http://bekindrewrite.com/?p=3074#comment-59154 In reply to Kate Loveton.

Aww. Thanks! No more, I’m afraid. All good things must come to an end, and all that jazz. :-/

]]> By: Jubilare http://bekindrewrite.com/2014/07/19/echoes-in-the-vacuum-part-v/#comment-59019 Mon, 21 Jul 2014 14:41:37 +0000 http://bekindrewrite.com/?p=3074#comment-59019 O_o I hadn’t realized that there were five parts. Shows how untrustworthy my brain is.

I like this ending better. Nearly made me cry. I loved this part especially : “Their world grew blurry when he thought about it, and it wasn’t a problem with the scope.”

It seems like the tension could be ratcheted up some, though. This section, though emotionally satisfying, didn’t grip as much as the preceding ones.

]]> By: Keith Edgar Channing http://bekindrewrite.com/2014/07/19/echoes-in-the-vacuum-part-v/#comment-58838 Sun, 20 Jul 2014 07:36:02 +0000 http://bekindrewrite.com/?p=3074#comment-58838 Great ending to a great beginning. I want more. There has to be more. Please!

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