Comments on: What if Star Wars Episode I Were Good? http://bekindrewrite.com/2013/09/13/what-if-star-wars-episode-i-were-good/ write unto others as you would have them write unto you Tue, 24 Sep 2013 03:13:33 +0000 hourly 1 https://wordpress.org/?v=7.0 By: Stephanie Orges http://bekindrewrite.com/2013/09/13/what-if-star-wars-episode-i-were-good/#comment-13823 Tue, 24 Sep 2013 03:13:33 +0000 http://bekindrewrite.com/?p=2212#comment-13823 In reply to jubilare.

I do agree!

]]> By: jubilare http://bekindrewrite.com/2013/09/13/what-if-star-wars-episode-i-were-good/#comment-13115 Sat, 21 Sep 2013 15:23:00 +0000 http://bekindrewrite.com/?p=2212#comment-13115 In reply to Stephanie Orges.

The Dooku thing was a little odd, but the way he gave Dooku a more interesting arc was good, and he understands ratcheting up the tension.

]]> By: Stephanie Orges http://bekindrewrite.com/2013/09/13/what-if-star-wars-episode-i-were-good/#comment-11668 Tue, 17 Sep 2013 01:14:21 +0000 http://bekindrewrite.com/?p=2212#comment-11668 In reply to jubilare.

He definitely added a lot by changing Naboo to Alderaan, and Obi Wan’s story is still very good. I think a couple parts were a little weak. It didn’t really make sense to me that Amidala could excuse herself from important political discussions to give a tour to some friends – but it would make sense for them to need a tour if they were there to provide security. So that should have happened some other time. And I didn’t see why Dooku (SP?) had to sacrifice himself. Otherwise, though, I love this guy. He’s so entertaining! Can’t wait for III.

]]> By: jubilare http://bekindrewrite.com/2013/09/13/what-if-star-wars-episode-i-were-good/#comment-11221 Sat, 14 Sep 2013 19:43:38 +0000 http://bekindrewrite.com/?p=2212#comment-11221 Sounds better to me, but his idea of Episode II is even better, I think: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=JAbug3AhYmw
Makes much more sense and has the needed character-development!

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