Comments on: Voice Week 2011: Thursday http://bekindrewrite.com/2011/09/29/voice-week-2011-thursday/ write unto others as you would have them write unto you Thu, 04 Sep 2014 01:32:26 +0000 hourly 1 https://wordpress.org/?v=7.0 By: bekindrewrite http://bekindrewrite.com/2011/09/29/voice-week-2011-thursday/#comment-2005 Tue, 04 Oct 2011 01:04:28 +0000 http://bekindrewrite.wordpress.com/?p=793#comment-2005 In reply to otakufool.

It sounds so awful of me to say I’m glad you “died a little;” but I am! : – P Thanks for reading and sharing!

]]> By: bekindrewrite http://bekindrewrite.com/2011/09/29/voice-week-2011-thursday/#comment-2004 Tue, 04 Oct 2011 00:56:11 +0000 http://bekindrewrite.wordpress.com/?p=793#comment-2004 In reply to pattisj.

Thank you! I hope you head over to voiceweek.wordpress.com and read some of every one else’s work, too. It’s both fascinating and gripping!

]]> By: otakufool http://bekindrewrite.com/2011/09/29/voice-week-2011-thursday/#comment-2003 Mon, 03 Oct 2011 03:06:53 +0000 http://bekindrewrite.wordpress.com/?p=793#comment-2003 AHHHHHH. Your last lines are so poignant. Died a little for him/her.

]]> By: pattisj http://bekindrewrite.com/2011/09/29/voice-week-2011-thursday/#comment-2002 Mon, 03 Oct 2011 00:15:23 +0000 http://bekindrewrite.wordpress.com/?p=793#comment-2002 These are so interesting to read, Stephanie, to see the differences side-by-side.

]]> By: robinhawke http://bekindrewrite.com/2011/09/29/voice-week-2011-thursday/#comment-2001 Sat, 01 Oct 2011 17:31:01 +0000 http://bekindrewrite.wordpress.com/?p=793#comment-2001 Everything was right with the voice, including the last line. I had trouble navigating the POV, felt like a shift, even if it wasn’t.

Robin

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